Title: The ever-living ghost of what once was
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Rating: PG
Genre: Gen, angst, friendship
Characters: Kono, mentions of Danny, Steve, Chin
Spoilers/warnings: Implied abuse
Length: 300
Disclaimer: Don’t own. Title comes from Band of Horse’s “No One’s Gonna Love You”
Notes: Written for the new prompt “Scar” over at the drabble community hawaii_5_0_100 . It’s like the mods read my mind--I’ve had this idea in my head for awhile. There may be more to this later; not sure yet.
Summary: Scars tell stories; Kono’s not sure she wants to know this one.
Kono thinks of that every time she catches sight of the knife scar on Chin’s chest or the gunshot scars on Steve’s leg and lower back. Those scars attest to the dangers the two have encountered. They’re scars of strength and survival.
Kono’s got her own scars as well. When she was in high school, she and her friends liked to compare scars. Most of them were small, results of wipe outs, klutziness, or just plain stupidity. It had been like a twisted competition: the longer the scar, the greater the glory.
Then she’d blown out her knee and had three surgeries to fix it, and suddenly her scars weren’t about glory any more. No, those scars tell the story of her broken dreams. They’re scars of failure.
And then there’s Danny’s scars.
Kono has only seen Danny’s scars once; even when Five-0 is taking time off to relax at the beach, he’s usually wearing a shirt. But after one particularly messy case that ended with all of them falling into an open sewer, they’d been forced to strip down to their undergarments and hose off at HQ.
As she’d stood shivering under the stream of water, Kono had stared with wide eyes at the crisscross pattern of long, twisted scars on Danny’s back. There’d been at least a dozen, maybe more. Steve and Chin had noticed the marks as well and wanted nothing more than to take a crack at whoever had caused them, judging by the looks Kono had seen on their faces.
But Danny’s never said a word, and no one on the team has ever asked about them, so the origin of those scars remain a secret.
Scars tell stories, Kono knows, but she’s not sure she wants to know this particular tale.
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And then I saw it was you and I was even more eager to read.
And I was not disappointed. I love that you have Kono's voice telling the story--she's probably the one I'd be least likely to write from--and you have her down so well. I love the insights into what the scars say about each person and that Danny's are still a mystery. Which fits so well with the show so far since he's still the one who somewhat keeps himself at a distance.
Of course, this little snippet makes me want more. Any chance we'll get the real story behind the scars?
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And yes, I'm thinking of trying to develop a story that expands on this. Any chance you'd be interested/have the time to help me out? I think if I had someone to bounce ideas off of (and maybe to actually write with), I'd be far more likely to get something out. :D
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Ooh, but I do! I echo
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Any chance of a back story to this? Because those sound like he was whipped. And I'm just a sucker for H/C and team love.
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That was really well done! I loved it.
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Can I ask, do you have Danny being a victim of child abuse or are his scars from a cop related incident?
Great work :)
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And you can ask, but I'm honestly not sure of the answer. I go back and forth between the options... right now, I'm leaning more toward a cop-related incident, but there's something powerful about a guy who comes from an abusive home situation and not only thrives but works hard to be a fantastic father.
...What are your preferences? :D I'll take all the ideas I can get.
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As for the fic, wow! So much emotion packed into just a few hundred words. Impressive! Also, I'm with those who've said they would like to read more. Kono may not want to know the story behind them, but I sure do.
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your fic The ever-living ghost of what once was has been recced HERE (http://community.livejournal.com/h50_rec_room/2766.html)
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I just realised I sound like a pushy H/C addict ...