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Sunday, November 7th, 2010 05:00 am (UTC)
You are just so awesome.

This fic is just so awesome.

The entire premise, your grasp of Danny's voice, the flow of it. And the subtlety of it--the way Danny's thoughts get shorter and more fragmented as his awareness wanes. It isn't explicit but it gets the point across. That's one of those neat showing but not telling things that isn't always easy to pull off.

And have I mentioned how awesome this is?

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