This story is epically amazing. I have to say it is a personal fear of mine to be trapped in my head like Jim is with no control over my body(!!) I was really worried that they would like cut him open without ever noticing he was still there!

I think it takes a truly talented person to write good gen and this is it! I love how clearly you've built up the Pilarians and their culture.

♥ I hope you post the next part soon!