I don't usually read much fanfic, psych or otherwise but i came across this and it caught my eye. I just need to say that it is an excellent story. I'm a writer myself and i must say that you . . . have more talent. I don't doubt that you've thought of this yourself but i think you should send this in to USA Network and suggest they make it an episode in their upcoming season. Your writing was very effective. I watched the episode in my head as i read this. I would like very much to see this on my tv.