Okay, I know nothing about H50, but felt I needed to at least glance at this if I was going to leave a comment. That being said, I know nothing of these characters or even what they look like. I don't understand their connections. But, even not knowing anything about it, the dialogue still flows, the story is compelling, and you describe everything is such a way that it isn't overwhelming but still gives me enough to fill in my brain. I love your ebb and flow of dialogue interspersed with thought - gives us great insight.
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You are seriously depressing me, here. ;)
Okay, I know nothing about H50, but felt I needed to at least glance at this if I was going to leave a comment. That being said, I know nothing of these characters or even what they look like. I don't understand their connections. But, even not knowing anything about it, the dialogue still flows, the story is compelling, and you describe everything is such a way that it isn't overwhelming but still gives me enough to fill in my brain. I love your ebb and flow of dialogue interspersed with thought - gives us great insight.
But I'm still depressed. ;)
Quit teasing!