ext_103947 ([identity profile] faye-dartmouth.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] moogsthewriter 2011-01-29 01:14 pm (UTC)

This fic just makes me so happy. YOU make me so happy.

I just want to highlight a few of your more brilliant moments in this fic.

1. Everyone ragging on Danny's apartment. Fits with canon and Danny's response at the end? Hilarious.

2. A reverse Cardini. You work in the slang so seamlessly that I'm practically jealous.

3. Linus reading the Bourne Identity.

4. That Danny is willing to put the money back even though he knows it could lead to the loss of the life he built so hard for. It's a subtle self sacrifice that really plays well.

5. Danny not being able to keep up with Rusty and Linus but having zero regrets.

In short, AWESOME :)

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